‘I love how you use different adjectives and verbs that mean what I intended to say but add vigour and variety to the scenes they describe.’
‘You’ve done some outstanding work adding new nouns from the Regency and Victorian periods. Those places where you marked serious plot problems after I’d moved sections around left me helpless as I realised with horror I’d lost plot thread but luckily you noticed.’
‘I think of us as collaborating: this project has become a joint one.’